✍️ Writing Practice eassy opinion

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    • #4835

      arroyo nieto
      Student
        @oscar

        “HOLLYWOOD FILM- MARKERS BELIEVE AUDIENCES ALWAYS WANT A
        HAPPY ENDING”
        Although directors commonly believe film audiences will be upset unless there us
        a happy ending, in fact, it sometimes spoils the story because real life isn’t like
        that.

        In the first place, Throughout history, from the cinema started, people usually went
        to the cinema to relax and pass an enjoyable and pleasant time so that forget their
        problems. People appreciated some topics more than others. The subject, people
        have preferred more along times, have been “love”. Other theme demanded a lot
        too have been war. Why would they prefer it? It would be due to the fact in theses
        films reflected themselves. For instance, Americans liked war films finished
        defeating enemy.

        Nowadays, contrary to what people preferred in the past, a huge number of
        people admired watching a film which finishes as it ends in the real life. In relation
        with love, no one would dispute the fact people can broke with theirs couples
        along their lifes, or USA doesn’t win war every time. Another major reason, if films
        always end delighted it will cause people are bored and dissatisfied with them
        provoking people give up go to cinema.

        Taking everything in consideration, I strongly believe directors should create films
        similar to writers make. Many arguments with many situations, about history,
        pass, present, war, love, etc… but it should always be similar to our life.

      • #4840

        Jonny
        Teacher
          @jonny

          Good structure and ideas Oscar. Some of the grammatical structures are not correct and difficult to read. I suggest you practice using these to improve.


          Although directors commonly believe film audiences will be upset unless there IS
          a happy ending, in fact, it sometimes spoils the story because real life isn’t like
          that.

          In the first place, Throughout history, from the cinema started, people usually went
          to the cinema to relax and HAVE an enjoyable and pleasant time (IN ORDER) TO forget their
          problems. People appreciated some topics more than others. The subject, people
          have MOST preferred more along times, HAS been “love”. ANOTHER theme which has been demanded a lot
          too have IS war. Why would they prefer it? It would be due to the fact in theses
          films reflected themselves. For instance, Americans liked war films finished
          defeating enemy.

          Nowadays, contrary to what people preferred in the past, a huge number of
          people admired (use a different word) watching a film which finishes as it ends in the real life. In relation
          TO love, no one would dispute the fact (✅) people can BREAK UP with theirs PARTNERS
          during their lives, or USA doesn’t win war every time. Another major reason, if films
          always end delighted it will cause people are bored and dissatisfied with them
          provoking people give up go to cinema.

          Taking everything into consideration, I strongly believe directors should create films
          similar to writers make. Many arguments with many situations, about history,
          pass, present, war, love, etc… but it should always be similar to our life.

           

        • #4844

          arroyo nieto
          Student
            @oscar

            thanks very much

             

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