✍️ Writing Practice eassy opinion

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    • #4835

      arroyo nieto
      Student
      @oscar

      “HOLLYWOOD FILM- MARKERS BELIEVE AUDIENCES ALWAYS WANT A
      HAPPY ENDING”
      Although directors commonly believe film audiences will be upset unless there us
      a happy ending, in fact, it sometimes spoils the story because real life isn’t like
      that.

      In the first place, Throughout history, from the cinema started, people usually went
      to the cinema to relax and pass an enjoyable and pleasant time so that forget their
      problems. People appreciated some topics more than others. The subject, people
      have preferred more along times, have been “love”. Other theme demanded a lot
      too have been war. Why would they prefer it? It would be due to the fact in theses
      films reflected themselves. For instance, Americans liked war films finished
      defeating enemy.

      Nowadays, contrary to what people preferred in the past, a huge number of
      people admired watching a film which finishes as it ends in the real life. In relation
      with love, no one would dispute the fact people can broke with theirs couples
      along their lifes, or USA doesn’t win war every time. Another major reason, if films
      always end delighted it will cause people are bored and dissatisfied with them
      provoking people give up go to cinema.

      Taking everything in consideration, I strongly believe directors should create films
      similar to writers make. Many arguments with many situations, about history,
      pass, present, war, love, etc… but it should always be similar to our life.

    • #4840

      Jonny
      Teacher
      @jonny

      Good structure and ideas Oscar. Some of the grammatical structures are not correct and difficult to read. I suggest you practice using these to improve.


      Although directors commonly believe film audiences will be upset unless there IS
      a happy ending, in fact, it sometimes spoils the story because real life isn’t like
      that.

      In the first place, Throughout history, from the cinema started, people usually went
      to the cinema to relax and HAVE an enjoyable and pleasant time (IN ORDER) TO forget their
      problems. People appreciated some topics more than others. The subject, people
      have MOST preferred more along times, HAS been “love”. ANOTHER theme which has been demanded a lot
      too have IS war. Why would they prefer it? It would be due to the fact in theses
      films reflected themselves. For instance, Americans liked war films finished
      defeating enemy.

      Nowadays, contrary to what people preferred in the past, a huge number of
      people admired (use a different word) watching a film which finishes as it ends in the real life. In relation
      TO love, no one would dispute the fact (✅) people can BREAK UP with theirs PARTNERS
      during their lives, or USA doesn’t win war every time. Another major reason, if films
      always end delighted it will cause people are bored and dissatisfied with them
      provoking people give up go to cinema.

      Taking everything into consideration, I strongly believe directors should create films
      similar to writers make. Many arguments with many situations, about history,
      pass, present, war, love, etc… but it should always be similar to our life.

       

    • #4844

      arroyo nieto
      Student
      @oscar

      thanks very much

       

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