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[Israel Tipa]

In your English class you have been talking about different ways people learn. Now your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.

Write an essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view.

Is it better to learn with others in a class or by oneself online?

Notes:

Write about:

1. subject
2. personality
3. ……………………………………… (your own idea)

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Currently, techological innovations have let people be able to learn through online platforms instead of attending a classroom filled up with students. Which one is better is a question that needs to be answered taking into account their advantages and disadvantages.

What it makes different to online education is the endless educational courses or programs, which individuals can benefit from.To illustrate, it can be found everything on the internet, from a cooking class to physics class.
Perhaps, online education has a weak point, which is ‘student isolation’. On the one hand there are people who prefer studying with others to studying alone and it is proven that a real educational environment can influence in people’s learning, but on the other hand ,online education is just one person in front of a computer who does not have the opportunity to share their views or only make friends. In spite of this, both face to face and online education fulfil their objective’ to transmit knowledge to people’. For example, people who work and do not have time to attend face to face courses and take online classes, have the same level of preparedness as a person who does take face to face courses.
In conclusion, it is better to pick up a way of learning that not only does it makes us feel comfortable but it also helps us to get our goals and suit to our objectives.

[Jonny]

Currently, techological innovations have allowed people be able to learn through online platforms instead of attending a classroom filled up with students. Which one is better is a question that needs to be answered taking into account their advantages and disadvantages. ✅

What makes online education different are the endless educational courses or programs, which individuals can benefit from.To illustrate this, it can be found everything on the internet, from a cooking class to physics class.

Perhaps, online education has a weak point, which is ‘student isolation’. On the one hand there are people who prefer studying with others to studying alone and it is proven that a real educational environment can influence in people’s learning, but on the other hand ,online education is just one person in front of a computer who does not have the opportunity to share their views or only make friends. (Long sentence, consider breaking up.) In spite of this, both face to face and online education fulfil their objective’ to transmit knowledge to people’. For example, people who work and do not have time to attend face to face courses and take online classes, have the same level of preparedness as a person who does take face to face courses.
In conclusion, it is better to pick up a way of learning that not only does it makes us feel comfortable but it also helps us to get our goals and suit to our objectives.

Some difficult to read structures in the last paragraph, but otherwise very good ?.

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