Essay | Time to Relax🔒
Write 140 – 190 words in an appropriate style.
In your English class you have been talking about the importance of relaxation. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.
Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.
Some people say that in modern society we don’t spend enough time relaxing. Do you agree?
Notes
Write about:
- the effects of relaxation
- ways people choose to relax
- ………………………… (your own idea)
Write your essay in the comments.
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Nowadays it is quite common for people to be overwhelmed with work or study. For this reason, it might be difficult to dedicate some moments to relaxation in our routine.
First of all, I think that benefits of relaxation are often underestimated in our society. Taking some time for ourselves may enhance concentration, reduce stress levels and improve life quality in more general terms.
People choose to relax in many different ways. Given the role of technology in our day-life, I suppose that scrolling on social medias, texting with friends or watching movies are the activities that most likely people, especially teenagers, choose to do while taking a break.
In my opinion, however, it’s much healthier not to involve digital devices in our relaxing activities. Taking some time for meditation or for walking outside in nature truly allows our brain to recharge its batteries.
In conclusion, people should give more importance to relaxation and take more time for it, always keeping in mind that spending hours on our phone might not be the best way to relax.