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B2 Writing 01 | Part 1

In your English class you have been talking about travel. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.

Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.

Is it better to travel with friends or with family?

Notes

Write about:

  1. The types of activities you like to do when you travel
  2. The kinds of accommodation where you can stay
  3. Your own idea

 

Write your essay in the comments ? (or send to me privately by message if you prefer).
You must use grammatically correct sentences with accurate spelling and punctuation in a style appropriate for the situation.

Comments

  1. Diana Diaz

    Traveling is well know as an amazing way to get rid of stress, sadness, worries, etc. Starting a journey with the family or friends, will bring to our life hapiness. Although, it is important to realise with whom we enjoy the most and the benefits that it will bring us.

    Some people think that traveling is about visiting famouse places, going to parties, drinking a lot etc. However, it depends on your personals interestings, and the ones with whom you travel. for instance, if we travel with our family, they probably will be interested in visiting historical buldings like me. In the other hand, parties will be part of the journey, if we travel with friends.
    Accomodation is an imprtant factor to consider, one of the best ways to acquire the culture is staying with a host family. While that may be true, staying in a hotel could be a better idea if we talk about “privacity”

    To sum up, I believe with whom you decided to go on holidays, should be according to your expectations and personality. On my personal point of view, taveling with the family is a better since we can make stronger the family ties with a journey.

    1. Jonny Post author

      Good structure and organisation Diana. Just some spelling errors to be careful of:


      Traveling is well known as an amazing way to get rid of stress, sadness, worries, etc. Starting a journey with the family or friends, will bring to our life happiness. Although, it is important to realise with whom we enjoy the most and the benefits that it will bring us.

      Some people think that traveling is about visiting famous places, going to parties, drinking a lot etc. However, it depends on your personals interests, and the ones with whom you travel. for instance, if we travel with our family, they probably will be interested in visiting historical buildings like me. ON the other hand, parties will be part of the journey, if we travel with friends.
      Accommodation is an important factor to consider, one of the best ways to acquire the culture is staying with a host family. While that may be true, staying in a hotel could be a better idea if we talk about “privacy

      To sum up, I believe with whom you DECIDE to go on holidays, should be according to your expectations and personality. FROM my personal point of view, travelling with the family is a better since we can make stronger the family ties with a journey.

  2. Roberto Paspuel

    In regard to a recent discussion about trips which are an excellent way to get rid of stress, some people have different points of view, if they would rather go with friends than family.

    Firstly, it is essential to find out what sort of activities you prefer, for example, if you go with relatives it is hardly impossible to go for extreme sports because some people are old. On the other hand, with your friends, you will enjoy thrilling sports like downhill or kayaking.

    Secondly, accommodation is another important factor to consider, one of the best ways to have privacy is a hotel, but also it depends on your budget or if you love green space as much as mountains you must use a camping tent.

    Finally, transport is so important since in some cases bikes are used by people when they go with friends, whereas with family they travel by bus or car depending on the number of people.

    To sum up, I believe with whoever you decide to travel do not forget to plan your trip in advance, and the most important it should be according to your expectations and personality.

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