✍️ Writing Practice Clothes in Workplace

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      Israel Tipa
      Student
      @Isra1994

      In your English class, you have been talking about the workplace. Now your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.

       

      Write an essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view.

       

      Business people often have to dress more formally, but some newer companies allow their workers to dress how they like. Is it better for business people to dress formally or casually?

       

      Notes:

       

      Write about:

       

      1. comfort
      2. customers
      3. ……………………………………… (your own idea)

      We can all agree that individuals have always related business people to formal garments. However, dressing casually has become a trend for business people. It is because it has many upsides which are appealing for employees.

      To begin with, what people like about dressing casually the most is how comfortable it is. For example, business people often used to wear garments like a suit or a tie in sunny days which created a sense of discomfort throughout the day but now they are free to wear the most suitable ones depending on the weather.

      Secondly, dressing casually does not only help employees to feel comfortable but it also helps customers feel in a trustworthy atmosphere rather than just feeling  force to give money. Therefore, it frequently enables business people and customers to have a good time and make deals at ease.

      Last but not least, allowing employees to pick out their own work clothes prevent them from spending high amounts of money in formal wear which is often expensive.So, they can help thinking about how to get money for it.

      I am of the opinion of that,employees should pick out their own style, as long as it looks professional and be proper to do businesses.

    • #5100

      Jonny
      Teacher
      @jonny

      Good range of vocab and structures, good organisation. Some of the phrasing is a bit unnatural, e.g.:
      We can all agree that individuals have always related business…
      Therefore, it frequently enables business people and customers to have a good time and make deals at ease.
      So, they can help thinking…


      We can all agree that individuals have always related business people to formal garments. However, dressing casually has become a trend for business people. It is because it has many upsides which are appealing for employees.

      To begin with, what people like about dressing casually the most is how comfortable it is. For example, business people often used to wear garments like a suit or a tie in sunny days which created a sense of discomfort throughout the day but now they are free to wear the most suitable ones depending on the weather.

      Secondly, dressing casually does not only help employees to feel comfortable but it also helps customers feel in a trustworthy atmosphere rather than just feeling forced to give money. Therefore, it frequently enables business people and customers to have a good time and make deals at ease.

      Last but not least, allowing employees to pick out their own work clothes prevents them from spending high amounts of money in formal wear which is often expensive.So, they can help thinking about how to get money for it.

      I am of the opinion of that,employees should pick out their own style, as long as it looks professional and be proper to do businesses.

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